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Wow this is amazing! Such vivid language and powerful writing.

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I love this poem. If you haven't already, please subscribe to my page so that you receive your new poem every day. I've always thought of writing a subway song. Where I live they aren't around, something about sea level and sand. However, this poem is great. It was as if you were speaking the poem I've always wanted to write. Maybe there will be a subway poem in the future. Great poem.

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Thanks

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